Dear Hiring Manager:
I am writing to apply for the position of a Member Service Representative in Ｏ.
I am a very positive, friendly and hard-working person. During my university years, my major was philosophy, because I like to think and read. After graduating from university, I worked in a theater. It was an interesting job, because I could see a lot of films. After working for 10 months, I took a job with Ｏ in their credit card call center. For me, this was a big challenge because I had to be very patient and careful. Moreover, I needed to concentrate a great deal.
For the past three years, I worked and at the same time I traveled in the Ｏ. That was a great experience, and I learned a lot of things. That is also the reason why I want to apply for this job.
Because I have done many different jobs, I have learned a lot of communication skills with people. Although I do not have relevant work experience before, I am a quick learner and an optimistic person. I believe I can do this.
Please give me an opportunity to work for you and I am sure we will have a good professional experience together.
It would be a pleasure to interview with you and I look forward to hearing back from you soon.
I can be reached anytime via email at Ｏ@gmail.com or my cell phone, +886 900 000000
Sincerely,
Ｏ-Ｏ, Ｏ.
Permanent Address:
ＯF. No.Ｏ, Aly.Ｏ, Ln.Ｏ,Ｏ Rd.
Ｏ Dist.
Ｏ. Ｏ
Tel No. Home:+8862-00000000 Mobile:+886 900 000000
Email Address:Ｏ@gmail.com
Gender: Female
Date of Birth: Ｏ/Ｏ/Ｏ Nationality: Ｏ Marital Status: Single
Education:
September Ｏ – June Ｏ
Ｏ – Bachelor of Philosophy
Ｏ/ Ｏ
September Ｏ – June Ｏ
Ｏ – Ｏ /Ｏ
Language Skills:
Languages - Written: Chinese / English
Spoken: Mandarin / English
Computer Skills: Word / Excel / PowerPoint / Windows XP
Certificate/License: Personal insurance representative
Work Experience:
Customer Service Representative, Ｏ, Ｏ / Ｏ ＯＯ/ＯＯ-ＯＯ/ＯＯ.
Explained credit card-related promotions and solved customers’ problems.
Housekeeper, Ｏ, Ｏ/Ｏ ＯＯ/ＯＯ-ＯＯ/ＯＯ.
Cheese Packer, Ｏ, Ｏ/Ｏ ＯＯ/ＯＯ-ＯＯ/ＯＯ.
Food Packing
Customer Service Representative, Ｏ, Ｏ/Ｏ ＯＯ/ＯＯ-ＯＯ/ＯＯ.
Assisted in solving customers’ problems and selling financial products to customers.
Conductor, Ｏ, Ｏ/Ｏ ＯＯ/ＯＯ-ＯＯ/ＯＯ.
Sold movie tickets
Employment References:
Ｏ
Supervisor: ＯＯ
Contact Number：+8862-00000000
Ｏ Company
Manager:Ｏ
Contact Number：+00 0 00000000
Autobiography
The English level is very good in this resume, and the organization is top-noth, but it doesn’t get the highest score because it needs to be a bit more interesting and career-driven. Because there is no “Objectives” section, stating clearly what goals ＯＯＯ has for this job, it is hard to understand why she wants this job, other than to make a little bit of money. It is important for her to state clearly her career plans, so the person choosing her can understand why she decided to apply to the ＯＯＯＯ, especially since it looks like she has changed jobs a lot in the past few years. Because of this, the hiring manager is going to be worried that she will change jobs again shortly after hiring her. Also, it is important in her work experience section that she state what she learned at each of her jobs over the past few years. It is not enough to simply state what she did. She must also let the hiring manager know how her work experience has prepared her for a job at the ＯＯＯＯ.